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Review of That Chair There  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi axtongard!
I loved your poem. You use visual and descriptions in the second stanza to bring your setting to life, and dialog that keeps the pace. It has a wonderful rhythym that makes it almost comical, if it weren't for the remorse the speaker shows at the end. You show talent and a knack for meter and rhythm. It reminds me of some of Shel Silverstein's works.

I'm honored to review your piece and hope you find this helpful.

Best wishes and happy writing,
-DW
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Review of Sam  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Five paragraphs. That's incredible. This is incredible. Thank you for sharing your talent. I got chills reading that last part. So sad *Cry*

DW
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Review of The Dinner Guest  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Laugh* I should have seen that coming! The sad thing is, there are people really like that.

-DW
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Review of After The Shadows  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I don't even know how to express how truly deep this is.
Seriously, I have absolutely no idea.

-DW
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Review of The Universe.  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautiful, beautiful. The answer is in us all.

-DW
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Ahhh Mr. Treadway seems creepy in that could-actually-be-genuine kind of way. Nice. :)
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Review of Always  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice poem! :)
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Review of Let Hate Go  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow. That is an awesome reuse of Frank Sinatra's Let it Snow (tho there will never be another Frank Sinatra) and I love your message. More people should see this.
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