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Rated: 18+ | (1.5)
With due sympathies to the pain experienced by a broken heart, the reasons stated for the heart-break are self-centric and shallow. If the poet so longs for the company of the love of his life and fondly remembers the conversations they had, then I fail to see how the stated reason for all his miseries should change any of those shared experiences. The universality and depth of a feeling as beautiful as love seems to have been undermined.

Also some grammatical and spelling errors have slipped in (It should be 'threw' in place of 'through' in the last line of the poem)
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