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Review of The Fairy's Hovel  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love the ending!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I like the story very much but a little confused at the ending..did she leavev real life to live in the fairy landbor did she stay in the real world?

When Sally is asked if she wants to be a fairy..it should be "too" not "to". Otherwise I found no errors. I enjoyed this story. Keep writing.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem. Sometimes we are so busy looking elsewhere fir things..we miss what is right around us. Keep writing.
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Review of Decisions  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this story any plans on making it longer? I did not see anything that needed correcting.
Keep writing
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Review of McDermott's Gift  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Oh I didn't want him to die! But a really good story.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very good story. I enjoyed reading it. Made me laugh.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Love it!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story. I liked the ending..hers will be a child of love!
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Review of The Shifting Sand  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This kept me on the edge of my chair. Kept waiting for him to be rescued. But he wasnt..no one will know where he is.
Keep writing.
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Review of One Step Away  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A lovely story of family love and God's love for us. Very good writing.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is an interesting story..you don't know what you have until you lose it or give it away. Sometimes therevis no getting it back..you have to live with your choices!
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Review of A Song of Loss  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
A good but sad poem of live and loss. Keep writing
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Review of Try The Uni  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Interesting story. I refuse to eat raw fish.
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Review of Groundhog Day  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love it! You made me laugh and that has been very hard to do lately.
Thank you!

Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story. I would like to read more. I think it would make a good book.

Keep writing
Dianne
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Review of The Golden Door  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good story! Enjoyed reading it.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Terrifying! I felt tensed tbe whole time reading it! Good story!
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a great story..sad but great..shows the depths greed can take us.
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Review of Grandma's Smile  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a great story! I enjoyed reading it.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
These are beautiful!
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Cute story! Made me laugh! I like the puns.
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Review of Promptly Poetry  Open in new Window.
for entry "Fire & Ice" Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this poem. I felt like i was right there with you. Keep writing
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Review of French Fries  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Some really don't know..never been out if the city.
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Review of Dawn  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is sad but so true. I wish 2025 could end all wars—very good writing.
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Review of Walmart Return  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good story! I enjoyed reading it. I can imagine an 8 ft panda!
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