I like this poem. I could feel the excitement at the beginning that changed very quickly to loneliness with the thought of not having the one you love at your side. Your words flow so wonderfully. Each line keeps the mind wanting more or at least mine. I hope to read of your works in the future. Keep it up you have a natural talent. It is rich.
Bravo! I am a huge fan of this story so to read another person's retelling of it was simply splendid. The style of words the flow was great. It really kept me reading to the end. I cannot wait to read the rest if it is anything like this. You have a great talent and you kept true to the story.
I enjoy this greatly. The way you playfully construct your words. Loved the imagery you use. Also how real and easy to relate. Very well written. Thank you for sharing your heart and your talent.
Samantha
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