I like this poem. I could feel the excitement at the beginning that changed very quickly to loneliness with the thought of not having the one you love at your side. Your words flow so wonderfully. Each line keeps the mind wanting more or at least mine. I hope to read of your works in the future. Keep it up you have a natural talent. It is rich.
I enjoy you memoir about your Beta Fish. It was very insightful on how you came to obtain them. I learned much from it. Did not know that fish could survive in a vase with flowers.
The information you added about the Beta Fish was enlightening and tied the rest of your memoir together. Sorry to hear your fish did not get along but they did inspire you to write a good piece here.
You did very well on sharing your emotions as well. It was brilliant. Cannot wait to read more from you in the future.
Bravo! I am a huge fan of this story so to read another person's retelling of it was simply splendid. The style of words the flow was great. It really kept me reading to the end. I cannot wait to read the rest if it is anything like this. You have a great talent and you kept true to the story.
I enjoy this greatly. The way you playfully construct your words. Loved the imagery you use. Also how real and easy to relate. Very well written. Thank you for sharing your heart and your talent.
Samantha
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