I really, really loved this one. I can really relate to it. Though I am not unsociable by choice, it's kind of by force. The poem had a very nice flow to it, I probably like poems that don't rhyme the best (probably because I can't write poems that rhyme, usually). So very good job!
Very cool! To tell the truth, I think that it should be longer, I think that there is so much more you could say. But that's just my opinion. Other than that, it was really good and well written. Hope to read more of your work again soon. And I hope that you would be willing to read some of my own too.
It is very good. I think it's great that you are able to make your poems rhyme; I have so much trouble doing that. I think I only have one that rhymes and I'm not sure it makes much sense.
Just one thing (and I'm really sorry to do this, I hate correcting people) you spelled losing with two O's.
Amazing! It was just the right length. I think that a lot of people would have tried to go on further but you got it just right. You have a very good voice and I'd love to read more of your work. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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