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Review of Little Glass Box  Open in new Window.
Review by R. C. Berry Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really, really loved this one. I can really relate to it. Though I am not unsociable by choice, it's kind of by force. The poem had a very nice flow to it, I probably like poems that don't rhyme the best (probably because I can't write poems that rhyme, usually). So very good job!
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Review by R. C. Berry Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
Very cool! To tell the truth, I think that it should be longer, I think that there is so much more you could say. But that's just my opinion. Other than that, it was really good and well written. Hope to read more of your work again soon. And I hope that you would be willing to read some of my own too.
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Review of Scared  Open in new Window.
Review by R. C. Berry Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is both a sad and heartwarming poem. It is very bitter-sweet, but you can really feel your emotion.
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Review of Time  Open in new Window.
Review by R. C. Berry Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is very good! It really makes a person think. I can't think of anything that could possibly be wrong with it; it's perfect!
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Review of Untraceable Trace  Open in new Window.
Review by R. C. Berry Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
That was very good! The emotion is strong and the poem flows together very well! Keep on writing!
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Review of Hollow  Open in new Window.
Review by R. C. Berry Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is really good! If you were going for depressing then you hit it straight on!
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Review of In My Dreams  Open in new Window.
Review by R. C. Berry Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
It is very good. I think it's great that you are able to make your poems rhyme; I have so much trouble doing that. I think I only have one that rhymes and I'm not sure it makes much sense.
Just one thing (and I'm really sorry to do this, I hate correcting people) you spelled losing with two O's.
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Review of If you had known  Open in new Window.
Review by R. C. Berry Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Amazing! It was just the right length. I think that a lot of people would have tried to go on further but you got it just right. You have a very good voice and I'd love to read more of your work.
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Review of the gentleman  Open in new Window.
Review by R. C. Berry Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very cool and dark, hopefully that's what you intended it to be while writing it.
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