This is a wonderful story! Craig and Tyra both feel as though they have to pretend to be someone they're not in order for people to see them for who they truly are. Hopefully you will be developing this into a novella soon as your schedule allows. I'm already wondering what happened with Claudia that broke Craig's heart and how does Craig and Tyra finally find their way to each other.
This information was very useful. I had never thought of searching for other writing communities by putting in a type of genre. It will be very interesting to find out what type of result that I will get by doing it.
Is there a way for us to have our particular work brought up in a Yahoo or Googles search? If so, I would love to know how to do it.
You are truly a great writer. You had me hooked immediately and i couldn't stop reading. I even found myself holding my breath as they tried to cross the river. This is truly a gripping story, one that I enjoyed reading very much. Hopefully you are persuing to be published if you haven't already because you definitely deserve! I truly believe that you have the gift of storytelling.
You gave me very insightful information to one of the things that I had been trying to figure out as a new member to this site who is still learning it. Your explanations were clear and very easier to understand, and it was very helpful to have the example open for me to see what you were explaining.
This was an excellent piece of fiction and I enjoyed it very much. I could just barely pull myself away. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your work.
You definitely know how to hook your crowd and I absolutely can not stop reading. You have done a wonderful job of building the suspense level to this point.
The emotions on both ends are so real that I feel as if I truly know Sara and Oliver.
So far I have read Chapter I and have just completed Chapter 2. I have fell in love with your characters who try so hard to be unnoticed by everyone else.
You have truly done a great job of developing them. I can't wait to see how and if they end up together!
Dream_child
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