Wow, this is AMAAAZING! I really like this story! I would have given it a five, but the ending seemed a bit abrupt... I still LOVED every bit of it though! Great detail and good job on the grammar! ((I'm a stickler for grammar, so, I notice those things, haha!)) I'm satisfied to say that this is one of the best stories I've rad in a while! You have a lot of creativity and imagination, keep it up! I will most definitely be reading some more of your stories! You got both of the things I like, you kinda got the romance aspect with it being Valentine's Day and what-not, but you also got the horror and supernatural aspect as well! Good job once again! Good luck on the stories you'll be writing in the future! You have MUCH potential! Toodles!
First thing I would like to say is, I am very happy I stumbled across this peom/short story! It is very well written and there is very good creativity and originality in this piece. There is also an overflowing plethora of imagery scattered throughout this beautifully written piece of work! Thank you for writing, you have a great talent and you use it well! Toodles!
-Brittany (The Real Drama Queen)
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