I've read many haikus and this one is my favorite all the rules are there and its so creative and it makes sence. Its hard to find some like this I find it truely amazing and touching.
It had my attention the whole time I find the topic an intersting choice, I love mysteriouce it seems and how mystical you made it sound with the dragon, I really enjoyed reading this.
You really showed both side of the story in this one. One side you see the suicidle and how bad it hurts and then you see the family and friends showing how they feel when they see a truly selfish act. This story shcoked me at the end and hurt to think about to. It's very sad, but well told.
this is a really deep story, I could feel the burning in my eyes as if I cried too. I feel sorry for the girl, at the end I find myself hoping that it is just a story.
You really but you heart in this one, I really like it on how it all came down to her. It must of been hard, I hope things will some how work out for you two.
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