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169 Public Reviews Given
169 Total Reviews Given
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I do my best to give an honest assessment of what I'm reading, I don't nit pick on spelling and grammar but will mention something that is glaring and should be pointed out.
I'm good at...
Reading,Writing but not so much Arithmetic. I like to walk and seeing what is in my sight line.
Favorite Genres
Mystery, Thrillers, Nature and whatever comes along
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good Morning stacymiles101 - I came across your add in the read & review section.

I was surprised to see and add instead of a written story. I think your add is well written and covers all the topics needed to sell the item. They were broken down in a chronological order, and it felt right.

I almost wanted to say I'll take one, but that's not the case.

If the stories you tell are as well written as your add, I'll look forward to reading them. Have a nice day
lucky dog


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Review of The White Raven  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good Evening HuntersMoon - I've read your poem a couple of times and I found it easy to read, the rhymes worked well. It was a pretty haunting tale, but told well. You did a good job. keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review of What is my name?  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Good Morning Selene - I've come upon your poem/statement when I hit the Read & Review. May I say welcome to WdC since I see you have recently joined our community. I've read your Poem several times and feel the heat of your words. Life is not easy and your poem makes your reader know life must have been hard for you. You used strong words to make your poem come alive. Keep expressing yourself and keep on writing
lucky dog


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Afternoon Bridgetoon - I came across your tale after hitting the Read & Review. I must admit, I had to look up the meaning of selkie before starting to read your story. It's quite an intricate tale and I think you told it well. I didn't notice in grammatical errors, and the spacing between paragraphs was nice. Your story flowed well, and was an easy read. You did a good job - keep on writing
lucky dog


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi G.B. Willlams - After reading your post in the newsfeed, I decided to check out your site. I enjoyed Something to Consider and feel the emotion and thought you put into your work. I concur and have been a believer my whole life. Your peace was short but powerful
Keep up the good work
lucky dog


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Review of Ache Within  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi Luna - I came across your poem from the Read & Review section, It took me awhile to read through your thoughts and emotions. Without a doubt it felt real, and you expressed a lot of sadness in your writing. Love can do that to you, especially your first love. You asked a lot of questions and I hope you've found the answers you were seeking. Your poem was different than most of I've read. I found it interesting, and sad.
Keep on writing
lucky dog


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Morning Joey's Ready for the Hunt - I came across your poem when I hit Read and Review. It was fun to read and I think well written. you did a good job with the rhymes and it all flowed very well. You did a good job - keep on writing
lucky dog


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Review of Home  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Soldier_Mike - After you stopped by I thought I'd check out your site also. I've read your story Home and found it interesting and enjoyable. I thought it flowed smoothly and was an easy read. I was presently surprised by the last sentence. You did a good job and I hope you won an award.
lucky dog - Don


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Review of Labrynth  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Good Morning HuntersMoon - I came across your story after hitting the Read & Review. I enjoyed your story, and it brought a smile to my face at the end. The words flowed well, and the pace was good. I think you did a good job. Keep on writing
lucky dog


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good Afternoon Tim Chiu - I came upon your poem after hitting Read & Review. I've read your poem and liked the words you used. It feels like they come from the heart, expressing what she means to you. I think you did a good job. Keep on writing.
lucky dog


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Review of They Call Me...  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Good Afternoon autumnjave - I pushed Read & Review, and your Poem came up. I've read your words and found them interesting. I don't read a lot of poetry, but found your words somewhat inspiring. I can see where the Genres you mentioned in your poem fall.
Keep writing and have a great week


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Good Morning lovebird - I came across your poem when I hit Read and Review. I enjoyed your poem, and felt you chose your words with care. your poem was easy to read and moved at a good pace. I'm not a poet so I don't know if this suggestion has any merit but your last line might read - but wanting the animals to be with me -
It's a good poem and I think you did a good job. Keep on writing
lucky dog


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Review of Finding Flies  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Afternoon winklett - I came across your poem when I hit read and review. I must admit I enjoyed your poem, stretched it out and made it last awhile. The verses roll of your tongue and are a delight to read. I think you did a good job. I was fun and brought a smile to my face. Keep on writing. You did good!
lucky dog


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Evening foxhole: I've read your essay and found it to be inspiring and full of some historic information. I enjoyed your story and I picked up on one mistake and possible changes that (I think) might make it read more evenly.
In Paragraph 6 - you repeated the same sentence twice.
In Paragraph 14 - 3rd line Never let it (be said) - next sentence
Pledge Now, and join me
I'm not sure if my suggestions are correct and as I read it felt more cohesive to me. I think you did a great job, and thanks for asking me to review your peace


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Tim - I hit Read & Review and your Poem popped up. I did enjoy it, but I will admit to reading it several times to let the words sink in.

I like the way you put the adversarial portion in the first paragraph and the ability of the combatants to come to an understanding in the second. I think you did a good job. Keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review of Snowball  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Good Morning Gel - I've read your Snowball Statement and found it interesting. You've made your concerns known and I feel for you, but nothing stay's the same. Grow and seek, you're young, there is a whole world of things to look forward to.

Take it from someone much older, Life is always changing, sometimes better and other times worse. Learn to roll with punches and you'll come out ahead. Have a good day and keep writing, expressing your feelings it will help to calm you.
lucky dog


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Review of Beach  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Turtle - I've read your three Poems, and I can see where your thoughts came from by your explanation at the end. It sounds like you enjoyed yourself and your Poems reflect that. They are short and sweet and express the fun you had with your father. Good Job
Keep on Writing
lucky dog


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Review of Angelina  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
HI TeeMarie15 - I've read your story, and it was very touching. You have done a good job of telling about your life and your twins. I'm sorry for your loss. You found strength in finding the words to describe the loss you feel, even though it all happened when you were very young. Please keep on writing you express yourself well
lucky dog


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good Morning Fyn - I've read your poem and I enjoyed it, though I did have to look up the meaning of Halcyon. The more I ponder on the poem the more insight I get into (what I think is) the true meaning. You did a good job - keep on writing
lucky dog


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Review of All The Time  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi Kenzie - I've read your story and I agree with your statement that God is Good all the time. Since what I've read happened in 2003 and it is now 2025, I'm hoping you found some relief from all the issue you went through.

You've certainly had your fair share of problems. Your written report covered it all in detail, or at least what you wanted to share. I'm not sure how to evaluate this peace, it is life with it's ups and downs. I think you covered the issues you were dealing with, so again I hope life has gotten better. You did a good job of explaining what you went through. Keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Howdy - I've come to port after hitting read and review and out popped a poem. I enjoyed it, so I checked out your site. Very good I have 1 year on you, but I've enjoyed what you have written.
Don
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good Morning Beholden - I've read your poem and the information provided about Mr. Marais. Your poem was profound and after reading all of the material. I re-read your poem and it brought a smile to my face. I think you did a good job and I enjoyed it. Keep on writing
lucky dog


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Good Afternoon Seuzz: I've just completed reading your story. It definitely had feel of horror. I not used to reading this type of story, but I think it flowed well, and the story itself was interesting. It might not be my cup of tea, but I think your story has merit
keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review of Medic for the cat  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
HI losing cat - I've read your poem and it flows well. I'm a senior citizen and I'm not sure whom you're romancing. There is no name to associate with whom you're talking to. You certainly put some work into it. Maybe you can give me a hint? Keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon G.B.Williams - I've read your statement of fact, and found it very up lifting. Your words were sincere, and you expressed your thought very well. I liked your peace and I think you did a good job. Keep on writing
I concur with statement and look to God in the same manner.
lucky dog


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