HI TammyRicheson Happy New Year
I've read your story and I liked it. Sharing the love of Christ is important. Your story has merit and I hope you keep on writing.
lucky dog
Hi the fatal descent - I've read your short story and found it interesting and enjoyable. The story line moved smoothly and it was easy to read. I think you did a good job. Keep up the good work and keep on writing.
lucky dog
Hi Sam J Walker
I've read your fiction peace and found it a bit confusing. I'm sure it's my problem. The story line moved along nicely and I didn't see any grammatical errors. I see this was entered into a contest, so I hope you won. Keep up the good work and keep on writing.
lucky dog
Hi AnnaRosa - Happy New Year
I've read your poem was impressed how well it went together. It was easy to read, and had some rhymes, though not necessary. I liked you subject and the you expressed yourself. Keep up the good work.
lucky dog
Good Morning Philabundance and Happy New Year
I've read your flyer and found it very interesting and substantial. All the issues you raise and your solutions are well thought out. It makes one aware of the problems not only in our country but around the world. This is a well written and meaningful and I hope you get a lot of responses. Have a blessed year
lucky dog
Hi Sam J Walker
Happy New Year - I've read your peace and it was nice. Simple to read and the story line flowed perfectly. You did a good job. I enjoyed what you presented, Have a great day and keep writing
lucky dog
Hi Dragonline
I've read your peace and I agree it's dark. It flows well, and I can the feel the pain. One can't be posesed and loved at the same time or can they? Good job keep on writing
lucky dog
Hi LTWrites
I've read your flash fiction and it's pretty good. It was short but sweet and I enjoyed it. I see flashes of the event as it unfolded.
You did a good job, keep up the good work.
lucky dog
hello Isokarifrancis
Words of Wisdom - short and sweet, it covers most of trepidations of life in general but there are so many more. Good Job keep on writing.
lucky dog
Hello F Birds - I've read your short story and had trouble fully assimilating it. It wasn't an easy read, but I managed to make it to the end. I didn't understand what the box represents and how it works. I'm a senior citizen so maybe I'm not fully understanding what the point is you're trying to get across. Keep writing and keep trying.
lucky dog
Hi WonderousGrace
Happy New Year to you and I hope 2025 turns out to be a winner for you. I've read your peace and enjoyed it. The story line moved along nicely, and was heart felt. I don't have errors or thoughts to improve what you've written. You did a good job and keep on writing.
Hi Mari.lara - I've read you peace, actually I've read it several times, trying to understand what you've written. I think I can see where you are coming from, and I hope I'm getting the correct meaning. I did not see any grammatical errors tho I'm not the best one to point those things out. Your story is different but good, and I hope you keep writing. Best of luck
lucky dog
Hi Purple Holiday Princess
I've read your peace and found it funny and interesting. Nice choice of subject matter, and both of your characters sounded real. You made it enjoyable to read. My only concern was you left me wanting more! You did a good job, so keep on writing
lucky dog
Good Evening Anna
I share your analogy of the word Failure. I've struggled with the same feelings. You encapsulated the feeling one gets when they succumb to those thoughts. Good Job
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Hi QueenNormaJean snow
I've read your peace and found interesting and enjoyable. It was easy to ready and flowed superbly. You did a good job. I hope to see more of your imagination in the future.
lucky dog
HI Recardo
I've read your essay and I found it interesting, and enjoyable. Your take on life is somewhat different than mine, but that's what makes the world go around. You did a good job. Keep on writing
Hi snailpebbles
I've read your peace and I did enjoy it, though it's sad. Sorry you had so many disappointments but understand how you've expressed yourself. My only suggestions would be to put a space between paragraphs it makes it easier to read. You might want to put in the quotation marks where someone is speaking to you or you're asking questions. Keep writing!
lucky dog
Hi Ricardo
I've read your essay, and I did enjoy it, and the story flowed well. I think you did a. good job. I don't know that I felt the depth of the passion you wrote about. I seems to be missing something and I can't quite put my finger on it. I'm not being critical, just an observation, and I wish I could let you know what it is. You've got a good peace and I hope you keep writing
Lucky Dog
Hi bmandal7 I enjoyed your story, brought back memories of my progression, but that was a long time ago. You did a good job keep up the good work Keep writing.
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Hello Jo Painter
I like your poem and found it easy to read. I also like the substance you used in your writing. You did a good Job, keep on writing
lucky dog
HI Rainplot336
I've read your peace, in fact I read it a couple of times. I have not read "O Me O O life" by Walt Whitman, so I'm not sure where to start.
I'm getting the feeling you're expressing some of your thoughts with those of his, but you're moving in a lot of directions. I won't say I fully understand where you're coming from but I think I get the most of where your story is going. Keep on writing
lucky dog
Good Morning hihohyena
I've read your story and it was interesting. It flowed well and was easy to read. I enjoyed it, and look forward seeing more of your writing. I didn't see any grammatical errors, but I'm not the best one to ask, It looked good. Keep on writing
lucky dog
Hi R J Fuller
I've read your story and it was interesting. It was fairly easy to read though I think if you'd put in spacing between paragraphs it would have made it easier. I like your story and plot, giving them something to try to survive. I think you did a good job. Keep on writing
lucky dog
Hi amy-Has
I'm looking around the site and chose yours to look at. I know all about hiatus's since I had been on one. Sharing thoughts on Halloween and wondering whom might come to your door. I've been here for seven years and we don't get any trick or treaters. Most of the families with children go to schools or churches, I believe it's safer.
Have a great Halloween when it comes!
lucky dog
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