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140 Public Reviews Given
140 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I do my best to give an honest assessment of what I'm reading, I don't nit pick on spelling and grammar but will mention something that is glaring and should be pointed out.
I'm good at...
Reading,Writing but not so much Arithmetic. I like to walk and seeing what is in my sight line.
Favorite Genres
Mystery, Thrillers, Nature and whatever comes along
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Review of Medic for the cat  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
HI losing cat - I've read your poem and it flows well. I'm a senior citizen and I'm not sure whom you're romancing. There is no name to associate with whom you're talking to. You certainly put some work into it. Maybe you can give me a hint? Keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon G.B.Williams - I've read your statement of fact, and found it very up lifting. Your words were sincere, and you expressed your thought very well. I liked your peace and I think you did a good job. Keep on writing
I concur with statement and look to God in the same manner.
lucky dog


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hi Chastoney - I've read your story, and though different if kept my interest, and I enjoyed it. Listing it as Fictional right where it should be. The story was easy to read and moved along at a good pace.
Keep up the good work and Keep writing
lucky dog


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Review of The Raven  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Sumojo - I've read your peace and enjoyed your story line. I thank you did a good job. I hadn't thought about the poem in a long time, but your story brought right back. Your essay flowed very well and was easy to read. Keep up the good work
lucky dog


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Review of My teacher  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi Obama smoothline Good morning - I've read your peace and enjoyed it. There was a good flow to your words and it was nice. keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review of Betrayal  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi DeelIsMe - I've completed reading your story and I enjoyed it. It moved along at a nice pace and kept me interested. I think you did a good job and I didn't see any grammatical errors, but I'm not a pro in that area. Keep on writing
lucky dog


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Review of Clean Slates  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
HI AB2 - I've read your thoughts, and find them somewhat thought provoking. You have blended the thoughts together and then reflect on beginning again and not judging. I agree that we want different and here's to finding it. Good Job - keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review of We the People  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Cheshire - I've read your peace and wholeheartedly agree with your summation. You covered a lot of ground and the wording flowed nicely.

The only thing I saw was the last paragraph did not have the space between after (double edged sword?) You may have wanted, and did keep them as one paragraph. If so never mind what I said!

You did a good job - keep on writing
lucky dog


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi OlyviaB - I've completed reading your story and it was very good. The story line moved along nicely, and it kept my interest to the end. I think you did a good job. Keep on writing!
lucky dog


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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good Morning Tim - I've read your poem and I've read it several times. It is thought provoking! I think you did a good job, I liked your peace.
keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Good Morning King your peace is short and sweet - but it says a lot about Love. I liked it! Keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review of A Store-y Day  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Angelica
I've read your story and it was interesting and an easy read. I can't say that I cared for the ending - you left me wanting! You did a good job and I wish I knew where the heart really ended up. Keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review of COWBOY  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Seabreeze
I found your poem interesting and fun to read. You've captured your love for Cowboy in the words you've written. It was easy to read and fun Keep up the good work
lucky dog
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Review of Why  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Ginger44
I've read your poem and I enjoyed it. Loss is hard take but your poem makes it feel better. You did a good job, keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review of Childhood fears  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi the fatal descent - I've read your short story and found it interesting and enjoyable. The story line moved smoothly and it was easy to read. I think you did a good job. Keep up the good work and keep on writing.
lucky dog
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Review of Breaking the Ice  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi Sam J Walker
I've read your fiction peace and found it a bit confusing. I'm sure it's my problem. The story line moved along nicely and I didn't see any grammatical errors. I see this was entered into a contest, so I hope you won. Keep up the good work and keep on writing.
lucky dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi AnnaRosa - Happy New Year
I've read your poem was impressed how well it went together. It was easy to read, and had some rhymes, though not necessary. I liked you subject and the you expressed yourself. Keep up the good work.
lucky dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Sam J Walker
Happy New Year - I've read your peace and it was nice. Simple to read and the story line flowed perfectly. You did a good job. I enjoyed what you presented, Have a great day and keep writing
lucky dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Dragonline
I've read your peace and I agree it's dark. It flows well, and I can the feel the pain. One can't be posesed and loved at the same time or can they? Good job keep on writing
lucky dog
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Review of Ireland Calls  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi LTWrites
I've read your flash fiction and it's pretty good. It was short but sweet and I enjoyed it. I see flashes of the event as it unfolded.
You did a good job, keep up the good work.
lucky dog
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Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
hello Isokarifrancis
Words of Wisdom - short and sweet, it covers most of trepidations of life in general but there are so many more. Good Job keep on writing.
lucky dog
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Review of "Box"  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
Hello F Birds - I've read your short story and had trouble fully assimilating it. It wasn't an easy read, but I managed to make it to the end. I didn't understand what the box represents and how it works. I'm a senior citizen so maybe I'm not fully understanding what the point is you're trying to get across. Keep writing and keep trying.
lucky dog
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Review of Christmas Mystery  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi WonderousGrace
Happy New Year to you and I hope 2025 turns out to be a winner for you. I've read your peace and enjoyed it. The story line moved along nicely, and was heart felt. I don't have errors or thoughts to improve what you've written. You did a good job and keep on writing.
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Review of December 2024  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi Mari.lara - I've read you peace, actually I've read it several times, trying to understand what you've written. I think I can see where you are coming from, and I hope I'm getting the correct meaning. I did not see any grammatical errors tho I'm not the best one to point those things out. Your story is different but good, and I hope you keep writing. Best of luck
lucky dog
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Review of Blackmail  Open in new Window.
Review by lucky dog Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Purple Holiday Princess
I've read your peace and found it funny and interesting. Nice choice of subject matter, and both of your characters sounded real. You made it enjoyable to read. My only concern was you left me wanting more! You did a good job, so keep on writing
lucky dog
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