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Review by Zack Leigh Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really like this! The story is already incredibly suspenseful, and the description is thriving. The flow is a bit odd, as if you're unsure where to pace it, so don't be afraid to have an exciting fast-paced story right from the go; if you're going to try it, then commit with all you can!
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