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Review of Glass Rose  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A great poem. Definetly one of my favourites on the site. The imagery is great, very discriptive.

The only negative I saw was in this line

"For the only one for me is made of glass."

The word For seemed unnesscary to me, and broke up the flow. I would suggest you remove it, but if not, it was still outstanding.

P.S: sorry for any poor spelling, it's late here
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Review of Down the Drain  Open in new Window.
Review by KC Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Positive:

Interesting topic to choose, but a great allegory to illistrate the bond between a mother and daughter. Very smooth ending, it brought out a smile, a little humorous.

Negative:
Nothing.

I liked the point where she plays with her sister, very heartwarming I suppose you could say.
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