This poem beautifully captures the pain and complexity of letting go of someone you love. The raw emotions and vivid imagery make it relatable and touching. It could benefit from a bit more clarity and detail to make the story more cohesive and impactful, but it’s already a powerful reflection on love and loss...good job!
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