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Review by Mara Knight Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like, I like. You hooked me with the first line: "Adam and Eve didn't know the chaos and destruction they would bring to this world," and tied it all together with the last: "They need God. That's why so much is going on. They need God".

I absolutely LOVE the way you alternated the last two sentences of each stanza, very poignant. The examples you used to illustrate what appears (to us) to be pointless death comes across as sincerely heartfelt.

I'm not a poet myself, but I know what I like. And I LIKE this!

Keep writing.....
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