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Review of Drown in tears  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Two poems that are the same but yet so different. Good job.
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Review of A Petulant Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, very deep and it gave me chills. This made me think of my mom and what she may have been thinking in her last moments on this earth. I think you have a good writing style and you did a great job bringing my thoughts of my life into your story. 5 STARS, well earned.
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Review of Tears Unseen  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dark, vivid, emotional, and sad...that is what love can be and your piece represents what most people feel after a break up.
The line "It’s not even close the sting of your words" I would add the word to, Close to the sting...
Good Job.
Scooter
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Review of Broken  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
"The ground beneath me was cold and a chill took root in my bones." Awesome line and the image it drew in my mind gave me chills. Very well done as a whole.
I give it 4 and a half stars only because I wanted to read more =)
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Review of Penitence  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Five stars!!!!! Great job on the build up, I didn't see the dark turn at the end coming.


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Review of The Larger View  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
great line
"Although individually we do not much impress,
together we become Nature’s most gorgeous dress."

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Great story and great pictures.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
sad list.....but something EVERYONE can relate to and EVERYONE should write,
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Rated: E | (4.0)
That's very deep and emotional. I can almost feel your pain through your writing. Good piece, sad but good.
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Review of Musiic  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
very good, you should check out my piece about music.
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Review of Lose Yourself  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Very interesting take on music. Music has a power all its own. The type of music, the beat of the music, and the lyrics can make a person's mind spin. Sometimes it can take people to a great and wonderful place. Other times, to place our mind don't want to be. Music, one of life great yet confusing pleasure's .
Great read, thank you for posting.
Scooter
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Review of Letter To Myself  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
i really like this, I feel we are all at war with our own mind.
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Review of EXHAUSTION  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
i love the beginning. I like "The blackboard and the white chalk dust Computers and corrections, assignments and functions
Crumbles my little mind’s crust….". It really put the image of a college class room in my mind. It also brought me back to the time when I couldn't remember anything right before a test.
Good Job on the whole thing.
Scooter
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