I really enjoyed the story but was a little confused by the end of it. I am just starting off but I would suggest that before you submit your stories to go through and read it for yourself, that way you will get a general view of how people see your story. I would also do a spell and grammar check just to be safe but I know some authors write things that may not agree with those checks, so you will have to watch out for that. Overall, it was a very good story and I enjoyed reading it and thank you for posting it!
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