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Review by Jen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
this is pretty good so yeah i like it
4.5 stars out of.
i think it would be more worth it if you try to bring in my kids there ages and not make it end like every 2 options and make more verity and try to make it worth it so then we don't have to do anything we dont want to so yeah i hope you like my review its all my opion and stuff but i hopey ou like it
also try to bring in more then 3 options and can you put in the 5-6 year olds cuase no one did that yet so i think it would be good for there to be a 5-6 year olds chapters
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Review by Jen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
HM IT WAS KINDA GOOD But i kinda think it could use some work
so yeah try to get more work into your writing.
its worht a 3 stars tho
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Review by Jen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
its a pretty good story, good choices but lack of adding.
3.5 stars out of 5
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