The amount of detail here is amazing, I love the way you describe things. I've often written when I've been in a darker state mentally and I always find it interesting to see the differences from normal. By the end, this left me wanting to read more and get a window into the darker world created here. Great job!
I love thunder but for a moment there I was drawn into the scene created. This is really sweet and by the end, I had a smile on my face. The thunder won't be harmful and fear will lose, when faced with loving arms :)
I feel like this flows very smoothly and there's something there I can relate to. It has an encouraging vibe that I like and it highlights something that sadly, many people struggle with. Good job! :)
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