I really liked this one. It had quite a twist. I assumed (I think I was meant to?) that Harry must be having an affair. But it slowly dawns that it couldn't be all there is to it. He seems too forgetful. You start to wonder (I did, anyway) whether he has senility/dementia/Alzheimer's disease or something similar. Interesting that the boss did turn out to be a woman! I wonder if that was deliberate. The ending (the twist) did seem a bit short, but then, in 1000 words, it had to be.
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