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Rated: E | (4.5)
What a great twist! This was well written and exciting to read. I especially liked the Nancy Drew and Hardy Boys reference and I laughed really hard at your character's curiosity and the cat it might have killed. Well worded. The only thing I noticed was your sentencing....they tend to run on a bit and I got kinda lost in a few of them. But other than that it is great. Good job
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