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Rated: E | (2.5)
Rose Nelson,
A poem bounded by simplicity with the potential of being a beautiful piece of poetry is what I thought 'windy day' is.If only you could get into the technical aspects of it , punctuation being the part missing it would have been a pleasure reading this poem,not that it wasn't but then the experience of reading it would have been better.A bit of clarity in the poem would have also helped.
In all a good piece of writing with so much of potential for brilliant writing.You definitely have the potential and the spark of an excellent writer.The more you write the better you will get with it.Happy writing!:)

Mysticsoul.
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