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Review of The Way, Part 2  Open in new Window.
Review by dark_spaniard Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Even tough it still does not match up to the first part; it is probably my wish that this excellent idea was to be developed into a full length novel. I can see from the pace the story is taking, it is going to be more of a novelette. The characters are still fine and we finally have our antagonist. Also the differences between the sisters are not as accented as in the last part. Great history anyway, do you have plans to develop it further? The style is flawless, and my appreciations come more form a story point of view, completely subjective. Still woth a 4.0.
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Review by dark_spaniard Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I’m hooked. I don’t think there is a better praise for a fictional piece of work. There are many ways in which an author can hook a reader. A compelling story is first among these methods. Travis excels in creating a well woven thread of a history where different storylines, seemingly with nothing to do one another, are destined to converge. But a great storyline is nothing without great well rounded characters to give it life. The Daimyo and the sisters plus the Sensei are full blooded characters with a history, motivations and personalities to match. Its rare to read such developed backgrounds flawlessly introduced into the narrative flow. The author does not support himself in lengthy flashbacks to give us the bare bones of the settings ambiance. It is ancient Japan but at the same time is not, the use of the language transport us there and the subtle references to the power of the Way (which we have not seen fully yet) and the spirits makes us foresee a fantasy filled environment in the coming deliveries of the story. Keep them coming, I can hardly wait to read the next instalment. Hook, line and sink.
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