LOL I loved this.. Very well done and put together, I not only have a friend like this I have a TWIN brother who is one and the same.. If there is anything that needs to be fixed I can't see it. BUT I am new to writing and I can't see errors like everyone else can. But I saw none I know of in your witty poem. I really enjoyed this very much thank you.
Very well writen, Sad in a way because I so understand what your poem is trying to say. My fav line in your poem is the ending because it rings so true
Do not lead to reunion of
Betrayer and betrayed
I can't give any advise on how to correct anything if it needs be, Because I am new. I can only say I enjoyed reading a poem, like I did this one thank you
beautifuly written, I could see and feel what the people where talking about. I enjoyed very much reading this and am very proud when I see someone like you being true to there talent. I wish I could help you with
grammar spelling suggestion or anything regarding punctuation but if you read anything of mine you will see I am really NO GOOD at that at all lol. Hugs Thank you
wow amazing.. This makes me want to read the whole book.. And more. I am going to have to go to your portfolio and read what else you have. I know that if I had this book I would not put it down till I was done. inspirational to read someone with so much talent, You are an artest. Your craft is well worded and you can picture things as you read what is going on, I wish I had more gift points, but I have just started out and I have less than 120. And I want to review all I can. Now I have no idea about
grammar spelling suggestion or anything regarding punctuation because I my self and so new and would not know if you were off or not on them. I love this thank you awesome if I had more gps i would give you more! Thank you
inspirational amnd funny, Very true to your craft. I have no idea about
grammar spelling suggestion or anything regarding punctuation because I my self and so new and would not know if you were off or not on them. I love this thank you awesome if I had more gps i would give you more!
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