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Review of Crazy  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoyed this piece, great word choice to get the feelings across of your intent. Nice job, I think a better format for this piece would be better, it seems to clumped up together and maybe add stanzas to the piece would help break up the poem for better reading. Great job keep writing!!
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Review of Invisible as Air  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I like the potrayal of the feelings in this poem, I did notice some spelling errors and I think it would be good if you broke up the poem in stanzas as a better format, it seems a little clump up to me, I enjoyed your word choice to get across the story.Keep writing!!
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Review of Decayed Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I enjoyed reading this piece-I thought it had good word choice to convey the feelings of a loss and strength to move on.Great work keep it up!
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