very good! i liked the setting and beggining it was very good. my favortie part was :
Denise poked her head into the kitchen doorway where she spotted Martha doting over an iron skillet. A pound of butter, and some salt and pepper rested at her right hand. Martha took a few strips of bacon and lay them in the skillet. The bacon sizzled and the smell wafted through the house like waves on the beach.
“It sure does smell delicious.”
Now im hungry
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