Here are a few additions to your memorial ceremony speech.
I could feel her breath as if it were mine. Wherever I traveled, she was with me. Her presence made me feel quite comfortable. It was as if we were one. We were thinking the same way.
I felt like I was in a fairy tale when I saw her brother, mother, and father. I wanted to be with them forever. I felt a strong sense of loneliness whenever they missed me.
I felt a deep sense of love even for someone from her village. Even a distant relative of hers meant a great deal to me. I was delighted to hear the name of her hometown as well.
I'm still trying to figure out why I loved her so much. Her genuineness, honesty, innocence, truthfulness, and unconditional love made me feel this way.
She's on every path, stream, wood, and everywhere. Until the end of time, I seek her everywhere and ever.
I think this is funny and veers a little bit toward sarcasm. Although it is short, the poem creates a nice flow. I like how you ended it. It is the second line of the first verse that you have reasoned in the last sentence.
Your writing seems to be a reflection of an exploration of truth and life. You conclude by saying that we should do the right thing, and the rest will follow. I found this to be the most inspirational part as it is a timeless truth.
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