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Review by Destiny Turner Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
"I will be working for trial period of two months" should probably have an "a" in there. I liked this letter though.

You really pulled it off. It was written in the form of a letter but provided imagery like a story does. I don't know if you did research on some of the things you wrote about, but they seemed pretty realistic.... Other than the idea that the president would hire a man right away just for making one correction in a document.
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