Cute story. It was a bit repetitive at the end. Like it just said the same thing that it had before but still really cute. I can just see the dog in my mind! I have had many dogs like that and they are so cute!
I'm not really sure exactly what this is about. Is it a writing deadline? I can feel the intensity of the words and I think it's well written. I just wasn't exactly sure if it was about writing or something else like maybe music.
This is a great romance story. I wasn't sure exactly what was going on in the beginning but it didn't take long to explain itself. The weather, family issues, and the way things were going certainly put a damper on the mood. Everything reminding me of cold and despair. Then learning that they had known each other and that they were about to rekindle an old flame was a sweet way to melt away the coldness of the backdrop.
I enjoyed this story and look forward to seeing the rest. Great job.
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