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Review by John Denny
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I like your writing,
First... your doing the right thing
I grew up in the 1960's alcohol was the drug of choice back then and I was one that was sucked into the void from peer pressure.
One should Always go with their own drummer, follow your heart, not your peers. I was taken into a realm from peer pressure that still haunts me to this day. I was sexualy molested by peers whom said they were the incrowd. I was being raised by a single mother whom no way could I talk to nor I thought could she comprehend the actions of my peers. I should have leaned to the nerdy side and stayed aways from the booze, which eventually led me to grass, meth amphetamines, lsd, and a host of other drugs in the 60's, Luckily I was smart enough to stay away from the heavy stuff , opium and heroine . I finally joined the military when I was 23 and they showed me the realities of the world.
I wish you the best in your writings......
look forward , never back. Write from the heart not from pressures of life.

Your writing is good, but use more indents and punctuation's
John Denny
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Review of The Pipple Tree  
Review by John Denny
Rated: E | (3.5)
I enjoyed this very much, I like the in depth explanation such as definitions in smell, behavior, sights, senses. I feel when a writer uses all his or her senses in their writing along with intuition, emotion and explanations it helps in the creation of.
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