FANTASTIC!!!...Well done...I love it...I loved how you made me fall in love with the robots...it is great...it is so interesting and so real....I love the way you know what you are talking about...it's catchy and I would love to read the books...I can't wait until they have kids...it is even romantic...what a great story...I had to read it all the way to the end.
FANTASTIC!!!
Hi, hello, and i have post traumatic stress disorder and non medicated!
Asking the holy white light to come pouring down upon your being and filling your soul with love and light and angels, can help and heal...I often visualize the holy white light as a pillar of pure golden energy that flows down from a spot just above me and seeps deeply into my body and refreshes and renews and rebuilds...the temple, otherwise know as our body...I will send love to you.
Maybe a miracle could happen for you and change it all around again in a new and interesting way???
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...Greed is the delightful electricity upon with witch i really must feed...
Yet will you say i never write it mydelf?... or will it ever sit up there, upon your dusty shelf?
I write as i go and find it a rapture to sow...my seeds as good deeds and my words as they flow...
And ya never know...where they go...to and fro...words flying head to toe...it only goes to show???
I find it so flattering and rely on the chance...that a stray e-mail might meet me in a trance of romance!!!
I got one today from a stranger, i say...and the words that they spoke, spoke of why do i joke?
"You are a poet and an accomplished one too, You waste your time writing words on yahoo"
...If only they knew how it feels to be "you"...!!!...
I am that "YOU" and how do you do...Wear my shoe and wear my glove too...for the feelings of rapture are what i "purse-you"...it ain't about money but more about honey and how the whole thing flows...and if it floats upon a nose of prose....and grows and grows...who knows???...Just as a rose...words tickle my toes and carry me up to where it all goes...no one knows...the words of those...and i humbly arose...My Ribbons and Bows...With arrows I froze...rewarded in clothes...clothes that they chose...my mirrors of woes...A light from, who knows?
...Shy as a killer and sweetly she tows...behind her a Public, known only as, "-Those-"
Those people are silver and gold with a glint...they are the wisdom and they are the hint!!
They are the fish caught without even a net as the future escapes us via the word, "-internet-"
................
Thank you so much for your very rewarding words that you wrote here, my dear!
if you could see my teardrops fall and watch them bounce off every wall,
you would know they are diamonds before you hear the call.
and proudly with honesty and justice and truth,
I take off my hat and throw it up on that roof,
and I say..."Go and find it", and I say..."Come as she may"
For if ever a stray word may come wondering my way,
it is paid in full glory, it is rapture in play,
of course i want money, of course i want pay,
yet to be flattered by thievery is more than i could say!
They would take my breath away,
as they say,
they
may...
...oh my god if "They' fought for the "Right",
the holy "Copyright"
Out-a-Sight and Dynamite!!!
"Rite?"
"Write!"
...Any "Wrongs", make it "WRITE WRITE WRITE!!!"
YAHOO YIPPEE AND COME FLY MY KITE!!!
Pardon me dear public as i faint with sheer fright!
Alright?
Goodnight!
I liked this.
And i laughed when i saw you deleted my words.
It is hard when a friend is lost.
My boyfriend of ten years died 3 years ago and it is still a bit hard to write about.
I was just fooling around with little red, sorry.
No hard feelings or nothing.
I loved your "Kathy Smile"
and will read "Grandmothers" later as I'm one of them too.
Cheers!
Pardon me, Mr Wolf, but i just could not help mydelf on that one...i just had to be silly!
Did i break the rules again???
"Catch me if you can honey!"
...I'm running down that little lane and out onto the pathway, too fast to explain...
(((as it ticks)))
...Is the only thing to change so it rhymes with lips...i only say that because when i read it, the words were there so i thought i would say that...but it is your work...and i loved it...i loved the words you used and found them to be powerful and deep.
Pearls before the swine dear...a love now killed in time...but now what of love with feathers of a dove and push and shove into a tight little glove...
Sorry!...i started to channel off there a bit...LOL...
-I love you-
I noticed this on the side scroll and it called to me to be read!
I loved it before i read it and i adore those words, they are straight from the soul and humble honest love.
Oh...i am doing my very best to hold back the tears falling from this.
I can't possibly read it again or i will breakdown sobbing darling...it is "a heart on a spike" and dripping with love juices...it gives me tingles and goose bumps and beckons me to re-read it.
Stop it!!!...before i fall in love with you!!!...Stop it at once i say!!!...xxx
Thanks for erupting a river of tears that are still flowing down my face!!
Well done indeed!!!...Ready to LIVE!!
Words are so powerful, so, thank you for that!!
It is so sacred and such a private thing to share and today i just found out that my best friend was stabbed to death...she was my childhood friend and what a shock!!
Death has a mighty blow and i have had several of my own.
i just loved this work, i really did..
Dynamic. Moving and it fully tore at my heartstrings, that's for sure!!
I cried before i even began to read it...and then the first line with the pale blue eyes made the teardrops squirt out of my eyes.
I am still crying and that means it is my favorite!
Love never dies! It only evolves into...our everything!!
I cannot even re-read it, as it has triggered me off into sobbing over my own heart and eyes of the palest blue stare...thank you for making me cry my head off!!!
and then i just re-read it and cried again...please!!!...It is perfect...!!!
Reminds me of that song...you are everything and everything is you...
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