Very good, powerful, language, which emotes an interesting interpretation of the self-reflections of one of the greatest military minds in all of history. The punctuation is a bit spotty, and a few of the line breaks seem inconsistent and end up breaking the stream of what seems to be a single thought. Overall this is powerful stuff and quite nice. Apologies for the late read; I ended up here via writing.com's "Random Read" feature.
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