This poem of yours, though it looks very good to me, could use some improving. Maybe if you made it into a book and separated the two sections into chapters, it would be easier for me to understand them. Despite that problem, very good poem of yours!
This poem kind of reminds me of the "Guidelines to Great Reviewing", except it's different. This item is a poem while the former is a item on how to honestly review and not get your account deleted. Still, I understand you are in pain. Honestly, I feel that way, too. Overall, that poem really helps me feel better, too.
Your poet is really good, really good indeed! Though it may need some improving to the poet you did. First of all, you should capitalize the beginning of each sentence. That way, I'll know your poet easier. Second, maybe if you capitalize every I in your poet, I would've gave a better rating.
Veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy shorttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt chapterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. In fact, I think only seven words can describe it. Shortest... Chapter... In The Forsaken Story... Ever.
Words... Words... Words... I just can't get enough words. I love words! I want words. Does anyone want words? I love words. Words are awesome! In fact, I could say the word "words" allllllllllllllllllll dayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy longgggggggggggggggggg.
I would love to see this alllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll... overrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr... againnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!
This story of yours is good, though it feels more like a episodes of series, a movie, or any kind of video than a story. Maybe you could make it better next time? I'll really enjoy it better if you could make it... well... better, right? Right? Please.
GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT poem you did mah boi! (Funny joke, right?)
Great poem! Like Cinderella says, "A dream is a wish your heart makes." In fact, all your dreams are all wishes your heart makes. But could all these dreams really be possible or are they all chimera? We'll never know for sure. We'll just have to follow our dreams.
Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa... noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. I think this poem needs more. Despite that, very good, very good indeed.
How Do You poem? More poems by the author who wrote it? Gift Points? You want it? Like Morshu says, "It's yours, my friend, as long as you have enough rubies." Or rather, have enough love for it. This is so great for you to do it! This speaks for my heart.
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