It sounds like you did some research on Honeyboy, or maybe you just already knew.
Having had the chance to talk to many professional guitar players, it seems that to most of them their instruments have a life and voice of their own, and they find themselves apologizing to them for not paying enough attention to them. By speaking from the guitar's point of view, you've captured that side of reality too.
As a personality, you've created one that probably could have worked as a partner for many a blues artist, I can practically hear it's voice in recounting their history.
All the basic structures seem to be right (I'm not the grammar police), it was a smooth read from start to finish.
This was very enjoyable from start to finish.
Keep on writing!
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