This does sound like a very personal poem. Very intimate. I sounds as if the parents do not feel good about the child even though they gave them life. very nice.
That was very well written. I makes feel as if there is something that is sad that is going to happen. The person doesn't feel happy. It is almost speaking about the end of a persons life when they are thinking about all the things that happened to them and that they are at the end and there is really nothing left ahead of them. It was a very nice read.
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