Honestly, I really liked this poem. As soon as I finished reading it the words "I liked it" left my mouth and a smile crept onto my face. It seems everyone has this feeling at one point in their life. I love it when people incorporate their emotions into their writing like you did! Please keep writing! I enjoyed this a lot.
It was so moving! I almost felt like it was wrong for me to read, as it seemed so personal and directed to a certain audience. My favorite part has to be
"but heartbreak and sadness
interfere causing confusion as to
whether or not I should
cry"
Each line, flows into the next. Great poem! Continue writing!
I liked it. It was a wonderful couplet! Advice: Spell check always! I noticed a spelling error that could have easily been avoided. Just here to help. As I read it, some questions aroused. Is this a couplet you wrote based on your emotions, or your religious beliefs? Or both? Keep writing, there's room for improvement though :)
It was amazing! I really liked it. The story had my complete attention throughout. At first I thought, Ruth is just some crazy old woman, but wow. Not at all haha. I enjoyed reading it because of the main character, Hank. I truly wish more people were like him. As I read I was just waiting to see a flaw in him, as no one can be perfect, but I was mistaken. Great writing. Keep going :)
Hi. I really loved this piece. It flowed nicely, and automatically reminded me of someone as I read it. Typically, I would assume you wrote this based on your emotions or feelings....One thing I can assure you is that I have felt the exact same way and writing is a wonderful way to release that stress and tension. I really liked this, keep writing :)
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