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Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked it!

However, I would personally have avoided having verses longer than 8 syllables or a long verse following a shorter one (& vice versa).

As to the imagery of this piece, I find the text soothing and quite beautiful! Keep it up.

Good luck.

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