I am crying! How true this story could become and how positive we should be that this exact thing can happen. The concepts brought about by "Trick or Tweet" are far from fictional as this world lives for technology and most everything depends on it. I was pulled into the story line first by the way the main character was "recording" it. The emotions involved and the fear felt were very real to me as I was mezmorized in my readings. I am an avid reader of suspense and this story fits that department to the tee. Keep up the great work and give me more, more, more!
WOW, that made me tear up! Don't do that again Just kidding, keep up the emotional depth and tales of your heart. It really catches the reader imagination.
Keep up the great work!!!
What a very cute and uplifting piece. The man folly was an amusing titter and his fate was inevitable but humorous. Now realize that's from a female's point of view. Sometimes men don't know any better!!!!
I appreciate the effort to make this "real" but unfortunately it didn't capture my attention. I seemed to emotionless. Sorry. Keep up the good work tho, you are very good.
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Just kidding, keep up the emotional depth and tales of your heart. It really catches the reader imagination.