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Rated: E | (4.5)
A mother, she's the most special person in this whole-wide world! No one can take her place. This poem is such a wonderful tribute to God's most intricate creation, a mother! I'm glad that you could tell her 'how much you love her' cause sometimes we fail to tell people how much we love them when they're around us.

Keep writing and keep writing from the depths of your heart!

Preeti
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Review of A Child's Father  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I despise fathers who can be so cruel, that too with their own child! It's disgusting. This one's written with deep emotion, but I liked the other one better, i guess we all have choices :)

Keep Writing!
Preets
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Review of Within  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
I know people feign all the time
But this habit is not just mine
When I'm sad I show I'm crying,
If you still think
I'm a faker
I'm fine
with it
For you never really knew me
Everone isn't the same you see!

Elladen, your poetry just got me to write those lines^^. Let me tell you what's best about this poem is it's so simple, its not begging to get someone's attention, its just putting accross your need to be loved, need for someone to drive away the pain.

Keep writing!
Preets
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Review of CHANGE  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
isrtly, lovely rhymes, and great theme.BUt you know its never too late, so what if you cant change your past, you have the remore to your future, that's the bright side!

oh another thing, there's nothign wrong in sowing your weakness, its only human to do so, i do it all the time and its a stress buster!

Keep writing!
Preets
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Rated: E | (5.0)
How can someone be so beautiful, yet so cruel. Fisrtly the title is so apt for the poem and catches the eye instantly.

This one's so personal, so heartfelt, i love it when poets bear their hearts into a poetry.

You know, a cactus does look beautiful, especially the one with flowers, but its gory and cruel isn't it?

Life's like that, and love will find you again :D

Preets
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Review of That Day  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Even though I am an Indian citizen and had no one from family or friends affected directly by the WTC attack, it was etched in my memory, the bad side of the memory.

How could someone even think it up?! But its past now and we must fight back, fight againt terrorism.

a time to act
a time to react
terrorism is a fact
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Review of War Is Unfair  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
War is the cruelest thing to happen to the entire mankind. But the irony is it's man-made, God never intended it to be this way.

It's few unfortunate one's who're paying the price, like in the middle east, indo-pak, chechnya etc. Yes, no more children should die now!

Good poem.
Preets
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Oh, this is wonderful!
Don't we all love such dreams?! I mean its only in the dreams where you can live with whoever you want to and meet the most unaccessible person too.

What i like about this piece is that its staright from the heart, sweet and innocent!

Keep Writing!
Preets
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Review of IN YOUR EYES  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love the fact that you've thanked your wife through this beautiful poem. But I think you need to edit it.

I love this line(s)-

LOVELIER THAN A SUMMER SUNSET
MY NIGHTS KNOW NO EMPTINESS

I adore simple poems, and this one ozzes volumes of simplicity! Keep writing!
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