I really like this, I found myself flowing with words immediately and seeing images of what I thought "it" was. As I read and was thinking at the same time picturing the demise of something your words revealed "it", ...that put a smile on my face and laughed. Thanks much brethren
You are so correct, and excellent in how you climbed to the top with this large and very challenging subject of humanity. As I read I began what I refer to as "forward-thinking" as I read. What that is to me is I am absorbing or getting into what I'm reading and I start to multi-task the reading and comprehension while having my thoughts.
So what that means is I'm bringing in mind other feelings thoughts of crying like for the imprisoned abused or enslaved and how damn special, fortunate, privileged, and so on I am, to see a sunrise, watch the storm roll on exploding with lighting, wind, and rain that overloads all the senses. The smell of my children on there heads and neck when they were just little guys, wow. So as I read and forward-thought, you wrote my forward-thinking causing many emotions to increase. I smiled, I felt my throat tighten up and eyes swell, choked back a little. Then I laughed at your insight into me because it felt good. Thoughts of how sad it is for so many who can't, and as much or even more sorrow for those who can and don't. The lack, or better put loss of sense that is chronic for so many humans. It's like a cancer eating and growing larger every noticed realization and thought of it. It is so difficult to think of it.
Also though, I was happy knowing, feeling the adventures of just life and was not the only one. Yes that was a very engaging, perfectly written read. Very happy I randomly clicked on this.
Thank you, and please feel free to go and read something I posted up here. I don't get on here often when I doe I promised myself to read and to write something...just slam it out. Keep writing!
sincerely,
Thank you for sharing! This a memory recall from the writer in the 1st person. I struggled staying interested because to me, it was difficult to read. Here is a link to great resources free online that I refer to when editing stories for myself and others. Edit what you have written already using the self-school if you like and I think you will see how quickly it will become a habit.
Thanx again!
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