AMAZING! I read both stories. They are the best on writing.com!! The amount of choices and shows is to die for. The amount of inshoe stuff is amazing. Celebrity inshoe stories are imposssible to find and this story has everything! The pictures help visualize greatly too!
I like the options and the amount of characters. The diagloue style of a script in the first chapter was a bad start though. I wanna read fluiently; not stop and go. I like the amount of chapters amd mix of possible deaths; really makes every path unpredictable!
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