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Review by Bree Morgan Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (1.0)
You should have more descriptive detail your story seemed to be rushed and ended too soon. Go into more detail about each things. It seems like you’re missing a part of the story. this story seemed to be short a bit too simple. the idea there wouldve been good if you went into more detatil about the rides and sights. Better luck next time.
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