It's really long and I like that but at points it tends to be too graphic and include way too much incest. Also the organization seems to be off quite often.Obviously i'm impressed with the writing but its just the options I get to pick from and the organization that make it hard for me to read.
Very creative idea which I think is executed quite well and I usually think most writers on here will take an original idea and generally screw it up which I don't see here at all. As for recommendations I'd say maybe go back with grammarly on some of these chapters because some are difficult to read.
the chapters are super short so it doesn't really have any detail. If writing.com lets me change ratings i'd increase it if I saw the chapters got longer but to be honest it's hard to try reading this when it's not literate.
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