Very interesting. You described the setting really well right off the bat and ivemalways enjoyednthat in a novel cause I like to be able to picture what I'm reading.Very detailed all the way down to where you refer to how the grass is moving.very tragic as well. But overall for the prelude, I consider it well written. Email me wen its finished cause id love to read it. Oh btw good attention grabber at the beginning. I comfortably give it a 4
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