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Review by DanteHarker Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
An interesting short piece. Perhaps try and avoid all the ly words, there is that idea of showing rather than telling. Nice ending :)
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Review by DanteHarker Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
This is the first story I've read on here and I found it an interesting read. I'm not a huge fan of first person stories as I often feel that they lack the descriptions that can be generated with third person stories. That said, I found this story had a nice pace and led the reader through the story.
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