"The winds summon the seas hurling and crashing it soars
mighty walls rush forward slamming her sleepy shores
thunder echos her cry lighting the way, she roars."this is excellent imagery. i can envision the scene in my head. It seems like a terrible storm.
This story was very INTERESTING. I was trapped like I couldnt get out of this whole dream and the whole story. I was surprised when you said you lived in a loser infested housing estate. I thought maybe you had a lot of money becuase of the dreams and the thoughts. Well maybe, living on social security makes you wish you had a lot of money.
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