Good poem in general. Like the way the flower opens and reveals not only the beauty of her body but of her person. The mind and the body become loved with time taken. Good insight into love as it grows wider in the mystery.
The poem is good in its Theology as well in its rime. Liked the flow but I do have to say the " " at times I did not understand. With the words of "
Him" or what relates with Jesus yes or "His" name but there are other times I was not sure why they were used. Example:
Constant companion, "HE"is with you"everywhere.
Typing error I believe is here.
The others are part of "His " teaching I believe.
Good and interesting piece.
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