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Review of Wild Woman  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is great, evocative and well controlled.5
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Review of The Crossroads  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a poem that is easy to relate to, and draws the reader in.
I wonder if it would be better in the fourth stanza to speak directly to the Lord.
eg/

How........will thy Light allow me?
How......... will you .....

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