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Overall Impression:
This is a beautiful, loving and touching poem. The love you have for your wife resonates brightly. She is a very lucky woman.
Form, Rhyme, Meter:
I didn't find any issue with the rhyme scheme or form of this poem but the meter was a bit forced in the third line of the third stanza.
Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation:
All of the elements in these categories are error free.
Closing Comments:
You have a lovely poem here that is a beautiful tribute to the woman you love. Write on!
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Overall Impression:
I absolutely love what you have done with this poem. It is perfect representation of our lives.
Form, Rhyme, Meter:
All three of these elements have been executed with perfection. I was most impressed with the how smoothly this poem flows.
Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation:
Superb attention to detail. There are no errors.
Closing Comments:
I must tell you that I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Your take on life being a stage and the parts we play in it is brilliant. Most excellent write my friend.
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Overall Impression:
There is a very intensive journey being described in this poem. It takes the reader through a variety of situations and emotions. In some ways I can relate to it and in others it baffles me. If nothing else, it's thought provoking.
Form, Rhyme, Meter:
There isn't a set structure of this piece or rhyme scheme. It's free verse form flows well and is easy to read.
Spelling, Grammar & Punctuation:
I didn't find any errors in any of these categories.
Closing Comments:
This was an interesting read of a sane through insanity. Thanks for sharing it.
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The feelings of sorrow over a loved one emmante strongly from this poem. It was clear to me that you care very much for this person. Prison is a harsh environment for anyone and having to visit a family member there can very emotional. The last line of this poem is what stood out most.
Technically, there were no issues found with the form or structure in this piece. All of the spelling, grammar and punctuation were fine.
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This story is quite fascinating and a good start, however I do feel it needs some work. There is a great deal going on in a short time. Your readers don't have enough time to grasp what's going on before it changes. I also feel it is too cramped. You need to give the individual paragraphs more space as well as moving the dialogue on lines of their own.
There were no spelling errors but some of the grammar and punctuation need editing too. With just a bit of work this story could be great. Good luck.
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Wow! These lyrics are incredible! I would love to hear them put to music. You have an admirable talen my friend. There isn't one thing negative I could say about this. You have outdone yourself! Way to go!
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The passion and desire that emmanate from this poem is enough to make anyone blush. You have written it beautifully and even though it describes a sensual scene; it is quite tasteful. The flow is smooth and even, the rhyme scheme is strong and there are no errors. Excellent write my friend!
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This is a superb acrostic! I love the way you brought it all together with the names. It flows remarkably well, and even though it is a poem, it reads like a story. You certainly deserve more than 5 stars for this one! WTG!!!
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I was quite taken aback by the feelings of pain and regret that emmanted from the character in this poem. The title does nothing to prepare the reader for what they are about to experience. I think it's a very strong write and was not at all what I expected. Good job!
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You managed to creep me out good with this story. The vivid imagery pulled me and and held tight right to the very end. The overall composition of this piece is great. I didn't find any spelling errors and all of the grammar and punctuation are perfect. Wicked write!
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There is an important message in this poem that I wish could be sent to all mankind. If everyone could just get along this world would be a much better place. I really enjoyed this poem and they way you brought it together. It has a nice even flow, strong rhyme scheme and there were no errors. Great write!
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This is a wonderful and fun way to pay tribute to a friend. I enjoyed the humor of this write and its whimsical nature. The image you included adds a visual punch for you readers.
I didn't find any issues with the technical aspects of this poem and there were no spelling errors. Great write Michelle!
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The state described in this poem is an awful place to be. I can relate to it on a personal level and I never want to be there again. The despair you experienced during this time emmanated strongly in this wonderful write. Thank you for sharing your work with us.
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A family reunion is usually a time to have fun and reconnect with loved ones we haven't seen in a while, however, this poem shows us that's not always the case. It is well written and error free. Thanks for sharing your work with us.
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This poem is amazing! You have done a brilliant job with the prompt. I was swept up in the beauty of the first stanza but that beauty soon faded as I reached the end. It took me by surprise for sure. Great write, no errors my friend. Keep up the good work.
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Review of
Wedding (E) An Italian sonnet depicting wedding written in strict iambic pentameter. #1574846 by Koyel~writing again
You paint a wonderful canvas of words in this highly descriptive poem. All the magic found in a wedding is captured here. The overall flow and rhyme scheme are great and there were no errors found. Great write fellow poet!
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I have been here; in this dark place. The Black Hole of Despair I called it. It wasn't exactly the best place I could have ever been. Your poem brought me back to that place and oddly enough it didn't depress me. Since I have found the light once again, I was able to enjoy this poem for what it is; a beautiful work or literary art. It is perfect. Awesome write Mari!
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The tale you tell about this poor teenage girl is distressing to say the least. It scares me to think about how often this type of thing really happens.
Your poem is very well written, has a nice even flow and there were no errors found. Write on!
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You paint a captivating picture for your readers with this spellbinding poem about the sea. It's vastness has always fascinated me and after reading your poem, I feel as if I have been drawn closer to it.
I didn't see any issues with the form or meter and there are no spelling errors. Nice job fellow poet.
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Bowling (E) A Kyrielle poem for Day 2, Rhythm & Rhyme winter contest.
#1518084 by JACE
I don't think I have ever enjoyed bowling so much! This poem is fantastic. The rhyme scheme and meter are perfect. It's fun, witty and I got a good chuckle out of it. This is one to be proud of. Awesome write Jace!
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Computer Woes (13+) A Minute poem for Day 4, Rhythm & Rhyme winter contest.
#1519854 by JACE
I couldn't help but laugh when I read this poem. The humor in it is refreshing. So many of us rely on our "puters" to get through the day but when they don't play nice we nearly have a fit.
I enjoyed your light-hearted poem. It's well written and error free.
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The Midway Beckons (E) A Free Verse poem for Day 7, Rhythm & Rhyme summer contest. #1584709 by JACE
Ever since I was a young child I have always loved the midway although it isn't called that here. Your poem highlights all of the best aspects of them. It is defiantely something everyone should expericence at least once in their life time.
This is a fun filled poem that was a joy to read. It is also error free.
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Okay,..the last poem brought tears to my eyes but this one made me cry. I was a daddy's girl and mine passed away in '93. I still have a hard time with him being gone. This is an emotionally charged poem and a tribute to all fathers who have passed on. Exceptional write Pat!
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I like how you brought this poem together and the whimsical words you used to describe the end result. It reads easily and takes a break from the more serious writing you do. I liked this one alot. It shows us a different side of you. Great write Pat!
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Limes (ASR) Prompt: a horse, an earring, and an ice cream cone #1554368 by romance_junkie
In this short but sweet story, Dan finds love with the help of a lime. Sounds strange but the two characters in this short share true chemistry.
You did an excellent job with the prompt you were give. The story is well written and holds the readers attention. It is also error free. Great write my friend!
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