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Review of I Want To Be Me  Open in new Window.
Review by Dale Ricky Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
You are off to a good start. I feel your passion.
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Review by Dale Ricky Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well written, I enjoyed the read. A fun story that reads like you have more to share. You left me wondering what happens next. A good hook. Thank you for sharing.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A good chapter 1. I am interested in chapter 2. Well written. Good grammar. Keep writing this story. You are on to a good read.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A well written and well told story. Grammar and spelling is excellent. Keep writing.
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Review by Dale Ricky Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Keep writing you told a compelling characterization from history. I learned something and that is what you were going for, well done. There are a few dings on grammar.
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Review by Dale Ricky Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Reads smooth. However, it seems the last paragraphs are missing. Consider breaking Blaze's description up and spreading the details into the following paragraphs. Instead of two leading sentences.
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