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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
very emotional... and touching... it feels like a summer love... that you hope survived... nice job
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
direct and to the point... shows how loving someone who is not worthy can hunt and still cause your heart pain. It reminds me of an old time era... something you would see in a historical romance novel... I liked it, and I am such a lover of romance.... now you need to write a poem that shows there is a true love out there for him/her
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
cute.... nneds a little more detail...
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Rated: E | (4.5)
very good info... thanks
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Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
Interesting poem... I would look at the first line in your second paragraph... I think it needs something more in depth
overall I liked it...
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