Touching, its sad to lose someone. But very nice poem indeed.
Positives: Nicely crafted poem. Good rhyming in some lines. Smart repetitiveness, it makes me feel sad - the person really has something good to say and then they realise that the person they were going to say it to was dead.
An intriguing story. The introduction to the chapter tells me about the area the story first focuses on, a dusty old bar that has a simple nickname. A little further in and I can picture exactly what the bar looks like on the inside, which for me seems rare in stories. The main character is like a darker version of Han Solo.
Positives: Intriguing. Well thought about. Good ideas. Highly detailed.
Negatives: Not many at all.
Completion time: 08:04
Positives: Both easy and hard to find words (not all just easy).
Negatives: Alot of words (it makes it a little too hard sometimes, depending on the person doing it. for me, too many cross-hatched words).
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